Yr 11 ADVERTISEMENTS

JACK
Look again at the PP slides for Mysteri and sort out the headings and contents which are currently muddled.

ALASTAIR

Media@Claremont5 October 2015 at 02:21

6 missing: please upload immediately.

Slide 1: Small flicks= serif font. Times Roman? It is classic and traditional. Re-phrase bullet point three about contrast. Doesn't make clear what you are setting out to achieve.
Slide 2: bullet point 1: re-phrase 'in this extent'; bullet point 2 unfinished!

Media@Claremont5 October 2015 at 02:25

Slide 3: you say a lot about wealth but should also mention confidence, outgoing quality, socialite etc
Slide 4: mention formality of outfit with three piece suit, waistcoat, white shirt, tie, leather belt (traditional values, conservative) but also that he has removed his jacket (informal, confident of approval)

ALEX 

missing slides: please upload immediately.

TOM 

missing slides: please upload immediately.

Slide 1 OK but add more detail: where does Brava man holiday, eat, shop; what technology does he have in his pocket, briefcase?

Slide 2 is a real muddle! EITHER you are doing the slide on C and C (so it's about the messages of the ad and the values of the brand OR you are writing about the tarhet audience.

NATASHA

all slides missing: please upload immediately.

ALFIE

no PP slides for me to see

Complete the analysis of the updated advert including the PP slide on how you made it (from original photo to decisions and revisions)

CHLOE 
Prepare your Appendix: it can contain all sorts of evidence that you have investigated and analysed advertisements, for example. In Word, make a header with your name, candidate number, school name and number, B321 Individual Portfolio. Then write or copy /paste evidence of work on advertising.